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| Subject: Working on the Black Sage Sun Apr 05, 2009 4:14 pm | |
| Rumiko sat on the ground working on his jutsu. He thought it needed to be fixed. There was something not really right about it. Or maybe it was just him. He sat ad fumbled with the tag some more. The tag usually exploded near the target and then the jutsu would release forming the Black Sage. It didn't seem likemuch but the jutsu acually stops the chakara flow of the user then sends them into a diffrent demension filled with drakness. It then eats away at you tearing your soul apart until there's nothing left. Many people thought it was genjutsu but it was acually Ninjutsu. They were so wrong.
He sighed and laid back aginst a tree. What can I do to make it better, he thought. He started to fumble with it again. The peice of black cloth that he had in his hand started to move. He looked at it before setting it onto the paper tag. "Ninja Art: Shadows Binding." The cloth sunk in and then he stared at the tag. On it read Black Sage. Perfect, but somethings missing. Then again, something's always missing. He sighed. He was so such a faliure. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:07 am | |
| Kinaga walked into the open for a little bit, then saw Rumiko. He looked at Rumiko fumbling with his black cloth and walked up to him. "Heya Rumiko, what's up?" He said, in a casual tone. |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:29 pm | |
| Rumiko looked at Kinaga. "Hey sensei." He said He looked at the tag. "I'm just messing around with stuff." He said with a sigh. He looked up at him. "What are you doing here?" He asked curiosly. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:34 pm | |
| Kinaga shrugged. "Ah, just takin a walk is all. Workin on your Black Sage, right? You mind if I watch?" Kinaga asked. He was a little curious as to how Rumiko came about developing this jutsu, and planned on asking him if he let Kinaga stay. |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:42 pm | |
| Rumiko looked at Kinaga. "Um sure," he said pulling out another blank tag then a peice of black cloth. The peice of black cloth started to move again. He set it onto the paper tag. "Ninja Art: Shadows Binding." The cloth sunk in and then he stared at the tag. On it read Black Sage. Maybe he thought it was imperfect because it was simple. He sighed. Or maybe it was just imperfect. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:45 pm | |
| Kinaga sat down and watched Rumiko use the Shadow Binding. "Hey, when did you say you started working on this again?" |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:58 pm | |
| Rumiko looked up at Unabara. "Um four years," he said softly. He ooked at the tag examing it. One second it was just a plain tag, the next it was a Black Sage tag." He laid it on the ground and sighed. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:04 pm | |
| "Hmm....what made you start up with jutsu Rumi?" Kinaga asked, wondering if he'd say anything about Kinaga calling him Rumi. |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:06 pm | |
| Rumiko looked at Unabara. "I've just got to much time on my hands is all," he said. The real reason was that he was tired of being a nobdy so he thought if he started his own jutsu maybe people would seem him as a somebody. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:26 pm | |
| Kinaga smiled. "Are you sure that's why? You know, with you being the little brother of a Kage and all, I thought you'd have tons to do." He said, then shrugged. He knew there was some other reason. If he could only admit that reason outloud...... |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:28 pm | |
| Rumiko looked at Unabara. "She has Okimur for that," he said. It was true. Okimur his twin brother(the one on the picture.) was the brains, he was the lesser half. He bit his tongue lightly. "Yeah, I'm sure that's why." |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:32 pm | |
| Kinaga frowned slightly, then smiled again. I won't push it if he doesn't want to tell me. "Well, it's a great jutsu, regardless of why you started working on it. You're doing good Rumi, you're doing really good." |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:36 pm | |
| Rumiko sighed with relief. "Uh, um, thanks sensei." He said putting the tag away. He sat back and sighed. "It needs improvemnt though, it's just too simple. It's something anyone could do," he said. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:43 pm | |
| Kinaga laughed. "You know, perhaps it's because it's so simple that you think it's imperfect. No, not anyone could do it. It takes a real motivated person to come up with their own jutsu. And even more to continue to work on it." |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:48 pm | |
| Rumiko nearly laughed. Motivation, you've gots to be kidding me, that's one of the last things I have. He looked at his sensei and instead of speaking his mind said. "Yeah I guess." He shrugged. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:59 pm | |
| Kinaga looked up at the sky. "So Rumi, you think you'll become a Kage one day?" He asked, and looked at Rumiko. |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:11 pm | |
| Rumiko looked at Unabara. "Seriously sensei. What kind of question is that? I don't have half the skill to be a Kage." He said. "I canm barely be a genin. I'm always screwing stuff up." He said with a sigh. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:15 pm | |
| Kinaga patted Rumiko on the back once and looked at him kindly. "Listen, you have just as much a chance to become a Kage as anyone else on your squad. And if you think you're messing up, it's only because you don't trust yourself. You have alot of skill Rumiko, and I mean it, you have alot of potential." |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:28 pm | |
| Rumiko gave a smile. "Yeah, I gues." He said. But he still din't think it was true. Sensei's had this problem where they always comfort their students when they were down. He shook his head. He wasn't feeling so well. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:31 pm | |
| Kinaga frowned and looked at Rumiko. "Hey, are you okay Rumiko? Listen, I know it's hard standing out from the crowd, but, I meant what I said." |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:37 pm | |
| Rumiko blinked. "Yeah I'm fine, just using too much chakra," he said trying to convice himself more than Unabara. He looked up at him. "Sure," he said sheepishly. That's what my last sensei said. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:59 pm | |
| Kinaga looked at Rumiko. "Okay Rumi." He stayed silent for a couple seconds then said "Listen Rumiko, if you ever need anyone to talk to about something, I mean, anything, you can come talk to me, okay?" |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 4:05 pm | |
| Rumiko sighed. "Listen Unabara-sensei. I mean it, there's nothing wrong okay?" He said. "If there was something wrong with me then Jaymaru would have been saught to it," he said. He wondered if that was true since Jutsumaster was busy alot. |
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Kinaga Unabara Admin
Nickname : The Plot Master, The Storm Ninja
Character Age : 33 Number of posts : 2063 Age : 30 Karma : 3
| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 4:10 pm | |
| Kinaga smiled lightly. I hope so.... "Good, listen, if you want, I could leave you to get back to your jutsu, or if you want, we could go grab a bite to eat down in the Stealth Valley, whichever you want." |
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| Subject: Re: Working on the Black Sage Mon Apr 06, 2009 4:17 pm | |
| Rumiko stood up. "No point in sitting here doing nothing," he said dusting himself off. Eating sounded good right about know. He'd been in the open since 3:00am that morning. |
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