Well? Does it?

It's pretty good, but if the lettering would be a bit more readable. (I was going to make something like this a long time ago, but I was too lazy and I was doing a much more complex version XD) but good job =3

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I know the text is hard to read, my com wouldnt let me fix it. At least its there.

No comment on the other one.

And I really wish not to be criticized. I merely wanted your answer.

I love it and kokujo why do you have to criticized people hard work