Okay Lightning, this is what I need in order for you to start posting.
I need a bit more from Family History, maybe tell about the parents or something. More about your sister and the time they spent together.
And how about some Character history, how she came to an Akatsuki.
If you could manage that I'd be very appreciated, and your Rp Sample is nice, but you do realize that Akatsuki don't train if you're serious about that Sample. You might have to ask Deidara about that.